Tag: Critique

TPG Week 266: I Wish This Were On The Shelves

| January 29, 2016
TPG Week 266: I Wish This Were On The Shelves

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds. This week, our Brave One is Galen Schulz. Aside from me being all crusty and cranky in red, we also have Ryan Kroboth with the pencil assists. Now, let’s see what Galen has learned as he presents us Related Posts:TPG Week 281: The […]

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TPG Week 265: Don’t Turn The Reader Off

| January 22, 2016
TPG Week 265: Don’t Turn The Reader Off

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week we have a new Brave One in the form of Riccardo Martino. I’m going to be by myself this week when it comes to editing. There was a surprise that had been lined up for all of you, but it fell […]

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TPG Week 264: Give A Damn

| January 15, 2016
TPG Week 264: Give A Damn

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have Gene Patrick as our Brave One. We also have Liam Hayes back in blue, Ryan Kroboth with his sharp pencils, and I’m the dullard in red. Related Posts:TPG Week 256: Same Problems, Different ScriptTPG Week 222: Writing Challenge […]

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TPG Week 260: A Better Resubmission

| December 21, 2015
TPG Week 260: A Better Resubmission

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a resubmission from Sean Mills, all the way back from Week 248. Liam is off this week, leaving Ryan Kroboth and I to do the heavy lifting with pencils and the red pen, respectively. If you want to […]

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TPG Week 257: Bad Taste Makes Me Stop

| November 30, 2015
TPG Week 257: Bad Taste Makes Me Stop

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have Brave One Jave Galt-Miller with us. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, Ryan Kroboth with pencils, and I’m the guy in red. This week, we’re all going to see what Jave brings us in Related Posts:TPG Week […]

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TPG Week 256: Same Problems, Different Script

| November 21, 2015
TPG Week 256: Same Problems, Different Script

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Jay VanVeen. We also have Liam Hayes in red, Ryan Kroboth with the great pencil, and I’m the guy wondering about my lot in life in red. Together, we’re all going to see what […]

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TPG Week 254: Complete Waste Of Time

| November 7, 2015
TPG Week 254: Complete Waste Of Time

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week we have Shawn Milazzo! The last time he was here, there were many jabs and body blows to my sanity. We have Liam Hayes back, and we also have Ryan Kroboth with a pencil assist. We’re all going to see if […]

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TPG Week 253: Still Nothing Learned

| October 30, 2015
TPG Week 253: Still Nothing Learned

  Welcome back, one and all, to The Proving Grounds! This week, we again have Solomon Steen. Liam Hayes couldn’t join us this week, so I’m going to be the lone guy in red, gibbering, but we still have Ryan Kroboth rocking the pencils! Related Posts:TPG Week 218: Writing Challenge Entry 3TPG Week 196: Blackenstein […]

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TPG Week 252: First Writing Challenge Failure

| October 24, 2015
TPG Week 252: First Writing Challenge Failure

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have someon who’s no stranger here, Joshua Crowther! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, Ryan Kroboth with pencil assists, and I’m the guy dancing a jig in red. Together, we’re all going to see how Josh handles a […]

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TPG Week 251: More of the Non-Sense

| October 16, 2015
TPG Week 251: More of the Non-Sense

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we once again have Solomon Steen joining us! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, Ryan Kroboth with pencils, and I’m the guy gibbering and slobbering in the corner in red. Together, we’re all going to see just what Solomon […]

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TPG Week 250: Complete Rewrite Needed

| October 9, 2015
TPG Week 250: Complete Rewrite Needed

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have Brave One Jave Galt-Miller. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, we’ve got Ryan Kroboth on pencils, and I’m the guy in raving in the red. Related Posts:TPG Week 225: When Even The Flawless Victory Is FlawedTPG Week […]

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TPG Week 249: Disconnected

| October 2, 2015
TPG Week 249: Disconnected

Welcome back, one and all, to another instalment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have another entry from Solomon Steen. We also have Liam Hayes on the mic in blue, we have Ryan Kroboth on the turntables, and I’m the guy behind the curtain, pulling strings and yelling at everyone who comes too close […]

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