Tag: dialogue

TPG Week 241: More Study, Blah Blah Blah

| August 7, 2015
TPG Week 241: More Study, Blah Blah Blah

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Raoul Ricca. It’s going to be all me this week—Liam had some other things to attend to, so you’re going to see me cry, vent, rage, and rock silently in the corner, all at […]

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TPG Week 240: When Dialogue Is The Real Failure

| August 2, 2015
TPG Week 240: When Dialogue Is The Real Failure

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Solomon Steen. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the guy shivering in the corner in red, and we’re all going to see if Solomon can take care of his Related Posts:TPG Week […]

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TPG Week 239: Another Talent Hunt Failure

| July 24, 2015
TPG Week 239: Another Talent Hunt Failure

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Osvaldo Padilla, who’s sending us another Top Cow Talent Hunt submission. We have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the jerk in red, and we’ll all see just what caliber of entries are […]

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TPG Week 237: Punctuation Is The Key To Clarity

| July 11, 2015
TPG Week 237: Punctuation Is The Key To Clarity

Hello, and welcome back to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Justin Jakimiak. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the guy ranting in red, and we’re all going to see how Justin treats Related Posts:TPG Week 273: Missed Opportunities On GeorwellTPG Week 258: When The Rewrite […]

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TPG Week 236: Bad Writing Is Not Good

| July 6, 2015
TPG Week 236: Bad Writing Is Not Good

Welcome back, one and all, to The Proving Grounds! This week, our Brave One is CJ Kral! We’ve also got Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the cranky-pants in red, and we’re all going to see what CJ brings us in Lucy and Brevis Related Posts:TPG Week 258: When The Rewrite Is Still BadTPG Week 256: […]

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TPG Week 235: Different Mistakes Made

| June 26, 2015
TPG Week 235: Different Mistakes Made

Welcome back one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week is something of a treat. We get to go over a script that we saw a few weeks ago. Amit Sharma has submitted his script again, so we get to see what was learned. We have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m […]

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TPG Week 234: Screenplays Aren’t Comic Scripts

| June 19, 2015
TPG Week 234: Screenplays Aren’t Comic Scripts

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in John Long. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the jerk in red. We’re all going to see how John does with Fat Chance Related Posts:TPG Week 218: Writing Challenge Entry 3TPG […]

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TPG Week 233: A Nice Effort, Indeed

| June 12, 2015
TPG Week 233: A Nice Effort, Indeed

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a Brave One who’s no stranger here: Ronnie Massey! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the cranky one in red. Related Posts:TPG Week 279: Choose Your Own LoD!TPG Week 277: Second Issues NEED To Start WellTPG […]

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TPG Week 231: My Blood Pressure, Or A Period?

| May 30, 2015
TPG Week 231: My Blood Pressure, Or A Period?

Welcome back, one and all, to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in David Rines! I’m all by my lonesome this week, so it’s all red, all the time. This is David’s entry to a writing challenge I did over at Digital Webbing. Here were the rules: Related Posts:TPG Week […]

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TPG Week 229: Jabs & Body Blows

| May 15, 2015
TPG Week 229: Jabs & Body Blows

Welcome back to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Shawn Milazzo. We also have Samantha LeBas in purple, and I’m the lazy guy in red. We’re all going to see exactly what Shawn does with Blade Bunny Related Posts:TPG Week 250: Complete Rewrite NeededTPG Week 225: […]

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TPG Week 228: Not Bad For A First Timer

| May 8, 2015
TPG Week 228: Not Bad For A First Timer

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Eric Brackett. We have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the lazy one in red, and we’re all going to see how Eric handles the Related Posts:TPG Week 257: Bad Taste Makes Me StopTPG Week […]

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TPG Week 227: Not Too Bad At All!

| May 3, 2015
TPG Week 227: Not Too Bad At All!

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Aaron Williamson. We have Samantha LeBas in purple, and I’m the jerk in red, and we’ll see what Aaron is up to in the SALOON written by: Aaron Williamson Related Posts:TPG Week 190: Artist […]

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